Iv’ry tower.
Brain power,
set me free;
free to be
myself for me.
I wrote this one a long time ago. I’m not sure whether I was saying that it is possible to be trapped by thoughts and being “clever”. It is almost a prayer, but I think I should change the punctuation to make it clearer. What do you think?
Iv’ry tower:
brain power.
Set me free;
free to be
myself for me.
Sue' s considered trifles 
Sue, you have not only changed the punctuation but also the capitalization, reversing the b and the s in the second and third lines of the Haiku. 🙂
I think the changes in capitalisation are necessary with the new punctuation. I did attend grammar school after all (tongue-in-cheek smiley)
The question is, which one works better? Sue